社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題(Essay II):

㈠文 章 結(jié) 構(gòu) 模 式：

Paragraph I: (1)引出要評論的事物或觀點(diǎn)(general);

(2)提出問題(specific)。

Paragraph II: (1)作者對該現(xiàn)象或問題的基本看法，即文章的論點(diǎn)句;

(2)支持性的細(xì)節(jié)分論點(diǎn);

(3)本段總結(jié)(可以省略)。

Paragraph III: (1)總結(jié)全文，定下結(jié)論(通常為我的對策或看法)。

Example:

My View on Fake Commodities

Like most people, I welcome the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society.

Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation’s economy. At the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people’s health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers and the free market in general.

In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things

㈡適 用 句 型：

首段引出話題：

1. Nowadays, …… has become a problem we have to face.

如今……已經(jīng)成為我們必須面對的問題。

2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem …….

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始關(guān)注……的問題。

3. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of …… has drawn/aroused/captured worldwide attention.

最近……現(xiàn)在的日益增多已經(jīng)引起了全世界的注意。

4. Recently, the issue/problem/question of …… has been brought into focus/

/brought to public attention/posed among public attention.

最近……問題已經(jīng)成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。

5. In recently years, many cities/nations/people have been faced/troubled with the serious problem of …….

在最近幾年里，很多城市/國家/人已經(jīng)面臨……問題/受到……的干擾。

6.Nowadays more and more people come to realize/be aware of the importance of …….

越來越多的人開始意識(shí)到……的重要性。

7. It is undeniable/There is no denying the fact that …… has become the utmost concern among people nowadays.

不可否認(rèn)，……已經(jīng)成為人們最關(guān)注的問題。

第二段細(xì)節(jié)論證：(分析原因)：

convincing given

1、Among the most reasons cited by people for…, one

important offered

identified

stressed

should be emphasized ……

mentioned

在人們所提出的對……最重要/有說服力的原因當(dāng)中，有一點(diǎn)值得強(qiáng)調(diào)……。

regard sign of……

see trend result of……

2、One may view the increase as a response to……

think of phenomenon reaction to……

這個(gè)趨勢/增長/現(xiàn)象應(yīng)當(dāng)被看成是……的一種象征/結(jié)果。

increase

change mainly results from

3、The failure in… largely /

success partly arises from

due to the fact that…

is owing to

attributable to several factors

……的增長/改變/失敗/成功的主要/部分原因是這樣的……。

4、We may blame …for…, but the causes for the problem

criticize roots phenomenon

go far deeper.

我們應(yīng)當(dāng)在……方面批評……，但這個(gè)問題的產(chǎn)生是有更深層次的原因的。

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